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Friday, February 17, 2006

A blessing in Disguise or a curse..

The enigma continues....
After a long gap my mind has come up with this imaginative lines.... I really donno whether this so called poetic sense of me is "A blessing in disguise or a curse"



In my dreams
I saw an Angel in Sky,
She made my heart to fly,
My feeling were going thorugh a stroll,
My mind was going on a scroll,
I was stunned as she came near,
I stood my ground though without any fear,
I asked her " Can u give me a wish",
She said go ahead and ask it without any fuss,
I asked her for a person who would care,
Angel said just open ur eyes and she is there,
I opened my eyes in a hurry,
found my mother move towards me steadily.

13 Comments:

Blogger Hell's Angel said...

u seem 2 get everything just in a flow.. gr8 work keep it up!!

12:49 PM  
Blogger Vejay Sarathy said...

hey seriously poetic man.. too gud from me and B!! :D

3:14 PM  
Blogger Icygenesis said...

hey u have got an amazing fluency in the language
accdg to me shes one of the beautiful creations of god

4:33 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ur really gr8 ur words touchin my heart n she ......... very lucky

5:36 PM  
Blogger Gaya3 said...

hey..this is really maravellous....i like d way u have got thru with ur words...its really gud...and really toughing...thanx for inviting me to visit..u....

3:49 PM  
Blogger Christabel said...

hey its a beautiful poem and its really touchin...besides its very true too :-)

11:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow it is an awesome poem... it really touches one's heart... too sweet.. u have talent dude..

11:56 PM  
Blogger Nivedita said...

expected something else at the end ;)

2:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

superb!!!!!!!!!!!! really superb!!!!!! :)

9:33 AM  
Blogger Perfume Of Happiness said...

i think mothers are always gr8 really fabulous for acknowledging them!!!

12:07 AM  
Blogger Divya Singh said...

good one :) appreciate d poet in yu ;)

9:55 PM  
Blogger poorni said...

gud one

10:17 PM  
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10:17 PM  

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