A blessing in Disguise or a curse..
The enigma continues....
After a long gap my mind has come up with this imaginative lines.... I really donno whether this so called poetic sense of me is "A blessing in disguise or a curse"
In my dreams
I saw an Angel in Sky,
She made my heart to fly,
My feeling were going thorugh a stroll,
My mind was going on a scroll,
I was stunned as she came near,
I stood my ground though without any fear,
I asked her " Can u give me a wish",
She said go ahead and ask it without any fuss,
I asked her for a person who would care,
Angel said just open ur eyes and she is there,
I opened my eyes in a hurry,
found my mother move towards me steadily.

13 Comments:
u seem 2 get everything just in a flow.. gr8 work keep it up!!
hey seriously poetic man.. too gud from me and B!! :D
hey u have got an amazing fluency in the language
accdg to me shes one of the beautiful creations of god
ur really gr8 ur words touchin my heart n she ......... very lucky
hey..this is really maravellous....i like d way u have got thru with ur words...its really gud...and really toughing...thanx for inviting me to visit..u....
hey its a beautiful poem and its really touchin...besides its very true too :-)
wow it is an awesome poem... it really touches one's heart... too sweet.. u have talent dude..
expected something else at the end ;)
superb!!!!!!!!!!!! really superb!!!!!! :)
i think mothers are always gr8 really fabulous for acknowledging them!!!
good one :) appreciate d poet in yu ;)
gud one
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